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Dunes
Jan 28, 2012 18:00:40 GMT
Post by cannockwolf on Jan 28, 2012 18:00:40 GMT
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Dunes
Jan 28, 2012 22:11:01 GMT
Post by Barry on Jan 28, 2012 22:11:01 GMT
The shadow areas are very suckle for you. But the grass does have good detail, and I like the small ripples in the sand, which just breaks the sand up a bit.
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Dunes
Jan 28, 2012 22:22:45 GMT
Post by nickjohnson on Jan 28, 2012 22:22:45 GMT
Hello Dave, Very nice - I like the dunes thing. We have plenty of them up here - as you've seen. A couple of things you may like to consider - we are talking cherry on top here. First, on the top of the grass line, there is a bright area of grass that looks a little hot and distracting - can tone down a bit? Second, at the bottom the point of the grass area pointed down toward the bottom edge of the frame is a little close to that bottom edge - any way to re-crop less close? In any event it is a nice piece of work.  |
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Jan 30, 2012 22:06:15 GMT
Post by cannockwolf on Jan 30, 2012 22:06:15 GMT
Well spotted on the bright bit of grass your right, as far a cropping there's nothing below that mate
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