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Post by janis on Aug 29, 2013 13:47:17 GMT
A few more from this week's outing #1 #2 #3 #4
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Post by chrisc on Aug 29, 2013 14:02:51 GMT
I like the third one best...something about the framing and color...nice.
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Post by janis on Aug 29, 2013 14:07:17 GMT
Do you think I should tame those highlights on the lower left? I did not really see them until I posted on Flickr.
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Post by nickjohnson on Aug 29, 2013 20:16:39 GMT
Bravo Janis. Like Chris I especially like #3. You might like to tone down the red OOF blob on the LH side a tad.
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Post by grasshopper on Aug 29, 2013 23:38:46 GMT
Some really nice work coming from you Janis. I'm partial to #2 myself, with #4 running a close second.
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Post by janis on Aug 30, 2013 1:36:50 GMT
Thanks Nick and Ron. I will apply a little first aid to #3. Glad you like #4, Ron, 'cos I do, too. I think though that I need to do something to make the in-focus bloom pop out just a bit more; suggestions welcome.
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Post by chrisc on Aug 30, 2013 2:02:39 GMT
With your permission - well actually without your permission until later - I did an edit on #3.
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Post by janis on Aug 30, 2013 8:22:24 GMT
Nice, Chris. I did a re-edit of my own wherein tamed the highlights, drew a bit more detail out of the butterfly and also applied a slightly different vignette, which may or may not be too heavy, can't decide.
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Post by janis on Aug 30, 2013 8:25:00 GMT
Looks kind of flat next to yours. May have to work on it some more...
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Post by chrisc on Aug 30, 2013 11:19:59 GMT
I don't think so at all...I think you did quite well and had you posted this first, I'd never given consideration to "playing" with the image at all.
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Post by georgem on Sept 29, 2013 15:03:23 GMT
Really nice! Number 2 jumps out at me and your rework of 3 is wonderful.
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Post by chrisc on Sept 29, 2013 15:07:35 GMT
Hey George, nice to see you back!
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Post by georgem on Sept 29, 2013 15:41:49 GMT
Thanks, Chris. I know it's a popular term to throw around, but I really do feel that I've a touch of ADHD.
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