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Post by Stevewebb on Nov 9, 2013 13:05:22 GMT
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Post by nickjohnson on Nov 11, 2013 20:45:58 GMT
Steve, nice idea and you've nearly made it work. I like the juxtaposition of the two sets of figures, and the fact that we can't see either of them clearly. Where things start to go wrong for me is that the figures have too little connection to bridge the compositional gap. Consequently - I keep seeing two pictures - and my eye just wanders around. The clapperboard building in the background is rather too prominent, which is not helping.
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