Red Trike, Blue Seat

[chrisc]

The question here is...does anyone else out there in photoland see what I am seeing...feeling, sensing...hard to put a finger on this one, but once I saw the tricycle, I knew there was a fun, if not different shot hiding in there. So, what do you think?

[rasbury]

There are some possibilities with this trike.In this image there is to much going on around the trike to take away from the simplicity of the subject itself.It would have been nice if it were sitting in a driveway with a plain wall behind it.

[chrisc]

Does this help...the original vision was this trike to be sort of emerging from this background of decay in a sense of seeking salvation for whatever sins it had committed to be left to die in from neglect.

[rasbury]

Much better as the trike now stands out from the scene of chaos and decay it's trying to escape from.

[nickjohnson]

Hello Chris,
#2 is much better. Not just the crop – but also darkening the sky between the background trees. It's got just a touch of what I call the “Blade Runner Look”.

[Barry]

I like the subject, especially the colours, red, blue and yellow, but agree with 'Ra' it needs to be isolated, I would go as far as to say it needed to be on a empty beach.