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Post by chrisc on Feb 19, 2012 18:46:51 GMT
perhaps I can get some comment here. CC, please.
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Post by Barry on Feb 19, 2012 18:54:53 GMT
They is a lot going on here, and I do like it, especially with all of those electrical boxes and wiring, as they seem to complement the weed growing over the outside of the building. I do feel that the image would benefit from a crop just above the upper windows.
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Post by The Wirefox on Feb 19, 2012 19:06:41 GMT
Yes, there is a lot going on so for me this is about texture and contrasts and I do think the black point needs shifting a little more. However if you do that you will lose detail in the door so selecting the door, inverting the selection and then tweaking the black point should do the trick. Unfortunately that will not do much for the flattish light. I agree with Barry about the crop. There is a fair amount of mid-tone but a b/w might work if you push the contrast.
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Post by robnaylor on Feb 19, 2012 19:22:55 GMT
Sorry Chris, but it holds no interest for me. The POV and compressed perspective are so flat that you cannot see that the door is actually wide open. All the remaining detail is so tiny that nothing is holding my attention. I'm guessing you are relating a link between the wires and the creepers, but they are too far apart to create a viable context link. The addition of a main subject is needed, an electrician perhaps? Perhaps the authorities would be more interested in this for Code Compliance ...
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Post by chrisc on Feb 19, 2012 21:03:51 GMT
Thought whoever owned the place wpouldn't want me messing with their door, so I left it alone...I wasn't looking for that connection between the electical wires and the vines until you mentioned it, so I edited, did some work on the door, cloned out most of the wires, redirecting one into a clump of vines...it was too interesting a place not to shoot but with some issues in being able to back up and shoot to avoid the distance compression.
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