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Post by mariehass on Sept 21, 2013 0:34:01 GMT
This summer, I have been working on making memorable images. I have been trying to tell a story out of what we see. 1. A farmer's hands  _MG_3922m by mariehass, on Flickr 2. A spectre  _MG_3820m by mariehass, on Flickr 3. The dance  _MG_3899m by mariehass, on Flickr Please comment/critique 'Rie |
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Post by chrisc on Sept 21, 2013 2:48:31 GMT
Now you're getting my attention. I'd crop about 1/3 in from the left to minimize the roadway/bridge in the background on the last shot, and leave dem other two alone.
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Post by nickjohnson on Sept 21, 2013 10:07:56 GMT
Yeh, what he said!
On the last one I would love to see a rework majoring on the magic light you have on the right side. Can do?
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Post by chrisc on Sept 21, 2013 11:13:14 GMT
Is there any space at the bottom of the farmer's hands. A half inch would likely do it. This image is a show winner as processed, a regional contender with a tad more bottom image.
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Post by mariehass on Sept 21, 2013 21:41:01 GMT
Chris, I have fiddled with creating more space at the bottom. What say you, now? 1.  _MG_3922m2 by mariehass, on Flickr 2. For Nick and Chris. What say you, now?  _MG_3899m2 by mariehass, on Flickr 'Rie |
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Post by chrisc on Sept 22, 2013 2:53:18 GMT
I like the new version on the farmer's hands, best.
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Post by Stevewebb on Sept 22, 2013 8:21:42 GMT
You are coming up with some really great stuff Rie.
The Farmers Hands is superb. In fact both recent edits are top notch.
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Post by grasshopper on Sept 23, 2013 2:04:18 GMT
Really like the Farmers Hands image Marie. A well done image from start to finish.
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Post by mariehass on Sept 23, 2013 2:14:24 GMT
Thanks, guys. You all make great teachers.
'Rie
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Post by janis on Sept 26, 2013 1:52:17 GMT
Lovely stuff, 'Rie. Good to see you back!
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