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Post by clactonian on Oct 7, 2013 10:43:56 GMT
My pal and I came across a farmyard in the wilds of Suffolk (UK) which contained several rusting steam engines. Here's an abstract image of a detail that caught my eye.
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Post by Stevewebb on Oct 7, 2013 11:45:20 GMT
Very nice Mike, and what a pleasure to hear from you. I trust you are well?
My one small issue with this is that the vignette is very heavy. May I suggest it is feathered in a bit more?
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Post by clactonian on Oct 7, 2013 11:56:50 GMT
Thanks Steve and for the suggestion. Yes, all is well thank you. I have been calling in regularly but I'm playing catch up now with a few shoots taken over the last few months.
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Post by clactonian on Oct 7, 2013 14:01:53 GMT
OK, so here's a mod ....
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Post by maryloveslucy on Oct 7, 2013 19:35:46 GMT
Ooh. Very nice. I love this type of image. Good eye!
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Post by Stevewebb on Oct 8, 2013 18:19:57 GMT
I have had to look several times but yes, I think the lighter version is better.
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Post by janis on Oct 10, 2013 1:46:11 GMT
My kind of image as well. I was fine with the first version, but am thinking the second is perhaps better.
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Post by kenc on Oct 16, 2013 16:58:19 GMT
I like the original - very nice work. I might back off on the vignette a bit, but it's much more dramatic when it's darker, and also shows off the texture better.
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Post by Antonio Correia on Oct 19, 2013 20:50:12 GMT
Both very interesting images Mike.
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Post by DonS on Oct 21, 2013 4:04:25 GMT
For me the 1st one is better... I can feel the texture...
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