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Post by chrisc on Nov 15, 2011 2:04:05 GMT
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Post by nickjohnson on Nov 15, 2011 14:42:41 GMT
Hello Chris. Can you please edit your OP and put some space between the images?
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Post by Barry on Nov 15, 2011 17:19:51 GMT
Nick, As far as I can see this is one image with the building behind a bank of grass giving the impression of two images.
Chris, I like this, filling the frame with this building, plenty of tones in the monochrome conversion. As with any photo, you may have got better shadows if taken during early morning or late in day.
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Post by nickjohnson on Nov 15, 2011 17:31:31 GMT
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Post by chrisc on Nov 15, 2011 19:14:57 GMT
Hello Chris. Can you please edit your OP and put some space between the images? it is just one image |
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Post by Kit on Nov 16, 2011 1:47:43 GMT
Chris, love the mono as it really concentrates my eye on the shapes and forms of the buildings. They stand out well against the cloudy sky, too. But I am finding that area at the bottom of the image that includes the wall and the weedy area beneath it is very distracting. It tends to take my concentration away from the clean lines of the top part. A crop just a smidgen above the wall would also make a more satisfying image proportionally as currently it looks a bit too tall for its width.
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Post by chrisc on Nov 16, 2011 2:25:08 GMT
Tried that but it really didn't look all that good. I shot it with the intent that the foreground debris added to the basic desolation, ruin, decay..
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Post by Kit on Nov 16, 2011 4:24:35 GMT
Tried that but it really didn't look all that good. I shot it with the intent that the foreground debris added to the basic desolation, ruin, decay.. Yup, I can see your reasoning, fair enough.  |
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